The Summit Writing Program

The method behind the magic

Mark Dato ’06 reported to the school that his required freshman English course at Columbia University covered three styles of writing he had already learned from the English and History departments at The Summit. He dubbed these the Fultz/Vetter/Rosero style, the Pat Kelly style, and the Cronin Research style. He was surprised at how many students didn’t know any of the styles.


In fact, Summit’s Writing Program is not a mystery. It is an amalgam of different writing approaches that have been tested in the school’s classrooms throughout its history. What worked was incorporated, and what made no difference was tossed. Among educational approaches to writing, The Summit’s program is unique and unusually successful.


From toddlers in Montessori through Advanced Placement English in the twelfth grade, each year of the writing program builds systematically on what was learned before. It is one integrated system based on the fundamental idea that reading a large volume of great literature, writing prolifically about it, and receiving one-on-one feedback on each effort results in mastery.

Ignition, Blast-Off in Montessori

Two-year-olds begin writing by tracing a sandpaper letter as it would be written using two fingers of their dominant hand. As they trace the letter, they receive three distinct impressions: they see the shape of the letter, they feel its shape and how it is written, and they hear the teacher pronounce its sound.


“Many parents find it curious that Montessori children are not taught the names of the letters; instead, they learn the sounds as the teacher phonetically sounds out words one letter at a time,” said Phyllis Schueler, Director of The Summit’s Montessori School. “We call the letters by the sounds they make: aah, buh, cuh, etc.”


Research reveals children are capable of encoding words months before they develop the eye-hand coordination needed to control a pencil. Montessori’s Moveable Alphabet was devised to facilitate children being able to create words, sentences and eventually to compose their own stories.

When eye-hand coordination happens, and the child has mastered the alphabet, the Scott Foresmen’s D’Nealian letter formation approach to handwriting is introduced. “Using this formation eliminates reversals of some of the letters,” explained Mrs. Schueler. “This formal handwriting practice begins in Montessori with excellent results, and it continues through the primary grades at The Summit.”


Of course, reading stays intertwined with the writing program all the way through the Upper School. “Typically reading is the first skill they learn before writing, and the children quickly jump from reading a single word to sentence stories,” said Mrs. Schueler. “This is called the ‘explosion into reading.’ For some children this process
will begin at age four, and for others when they’re five or six. Most of our children will be reading very comfortably when they enter first grade.”

Writing Workshop Takes Over in Lower School

Drafting, revising, editing, and publishing are the key steps taught to students in the first through fourth grade as part of the Writing Workshop program. Students are introduced to grammar, content, sentence formation, mechanics, and organization – all of which are central concepts in writing proficiency.

As the children progress through their primary years, they learn about and practice writing in different genres (narrative, expository, etc.). They use journals, write from life experiences, begin to use punctuation, and learn how different parts of speech are used in writing complete thoughts. They begin using more complex rules and writing paragraphs which include topic sentences, supporting details and conclusions.

“Because teachers model and then facilitate as students learn in a workshop setting, our program is tailored to meet individual needs,” said Terry Malone, Lower School Director. “The Writing Workshop allows us to challenge students who are working at advanced levels, and at the same time work with students who need additional support to meet the standards. Writing Workshop allows teachers to individualize instruction so every child reaches or exceeds the standards.”


Beyond classroom teacher feedback, Lower School students also benefit from the expertise of Stephanie Duggan, Summit’s literacy instructor who spends 100 percent of her time working with children one-on-one. Sometimes her work is remedial; other times she helps accelerate the progress of the advanced writers.
“By the end of fourth grade, students are proficient in writing paragraphs,” said Mr. Malone. “They have a firm foundation in grammar and punctuation. They have experience with writing in a variety of genres for a variety of purposes and audiences. They are proficient in using manuscript and cursive handwriting, and they are proficient in using technology in the writing process.”

 

Crafting and Proving the Thesis Emerges in Middle School



The Middle School approach to writing is based on teaching students to craft and prove a thesis. Essay writing begins in the fifth grade. “Each assignment in the Middle School has a certain set of expectations that must be met,” explained eighth grade Language Arts teacher Rosie Alway. “We look for specific details that support the thesis, grammatical elements, vocabulary elements, overall mechanics, and fluency of writing.”


By the time students complete eighth grade, they have written six full length essays (five to six paragraphs) and a history research paper during this final Middle School year. The program also offers a variety of creative writing opportunities along the way.


Personalized instruction and attention to a student’s learning style are important to how writing is taught. “I have always taught my students to write out or print out a rough draft for editing,” said Mrs. Alway. “The visual learner can see the errors. I encourage the auditory learner to have someone read the essay aloud so the errors can be heard.” She offers extra help with essays before and after school.
“I prepare my students for the rigorous writing demands of the Upper School by teaching them how to support a stated thesis effectively,” Mrs. Alway said. “I teach them to craft their essays in the same manner taught in the Upper School. I confer with the Upper School faculty often to be sure we are consistent.”

The Upper School: Writing with Clarity and Eloquence

In the Upper School, the goal is to make students feel comfortable writing often about literature. “I think part of what distinguishes our writing program quite frankly is volume,” said Upper School English Department Chair Pat Kelly. “We assign a lot of papers that are all graded carefully and given back to the students. The opportunity is there for the student to do a post mortem, go over their paper, and figure out the kinds of things they need to improve on. That volume of paper after paper after paper gives students a comfort in doing the assignments.”


“When you look at the range of books that we write about in four years here, it’s an extraordinary testament to the students’ abilities, and it helps to build confidence as they deal with these very difficult texts and succeed time and time again at writing something coherent and interesting about them,” Mr. Kelly continued. “That just has to build your sense of confidence in your own ability to write with clarity as well as eloquence, because you’re constantly being exposed to writers who write with clarity
and eloquence.”


Upper School English teacher Mary Vetter explained that the writing builds from year to year. The senior AP English class draws upon everything the student has
Depth, Clarity and Eloquence Define Upper School Writing Program learned. “Every student has the same kind of training,” she said.“Regardless of the course, they feel comfortable enough having been taught the way we teach to walk into the class and to do well. We also focus on not only techniques but literary elements too.”


Summit’s History department also takes writing seriously. Kelly Cronin, who teaches history to Upper School students, pointed out that while styles of English versus historical writing may differ, “the basics of good writing are the same. Composition, style, mechanics, good organization, topic sentences – all of that is important in a history paper as well,” she said.


The sophomore history research paper is a rite of passage for all students. Those who go on to take the Honors Research course write a 25-50 page paper. Key skills and lessons taught in these courses include navigating online research databases; distinguishing primary, secondary and tertiary sources; mastering the note card system; creating an argument rather than a description; mapping, outlining, and drafting the paper; using the formal writing style; employing the Chicago endnote format; and recognizing that history is not a set of facts to be memorized.


Ms. Cronin has learned over the years that meeting with students individually about their outlines is the single most effective way toward a superior final paper. “Reading my comments was simply not as effective as having a conference about the outline,” she said. “The problem, of course, is that meeting with every student outside of class is enormously time consuming. But it has resulted in vastly improved papers.”


The Summit Writing Program continues to receive accolades from parents, colleges, alumni and professional educators. To those outside of The Summit the program appears to be magic, but skilled and demanding teachers dedicated to giving children the personal attention they need are the “behind the curtain” factors that make it all possible.